《高考英语全国卷中调查报告写作导练》-教育论文，中学教育论文-论文范文参考-科学狗论文网

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高考英语全国卷中调查报告写作导练

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郑会雪

一、文体概述

调查报告，常以图表或提纲的方式给定写作内容，体裁以议论文和说明文为主。文章结构通常为：General idea→Facts→Reasons→Solutions/ Suggestions/ Your idea。写作时应注意：1. 引出报告结果或发表议论或个人看法时，常用现在时；如有具体的时间状语，则应视具体情况而定。2. 遇到相似的内容描述或分析时，建议变换表达。

二、必备短语

1. do / carry out / conduct a survey on... 进行一次关于……的调查

2. 75 percent of the students 75%的学生

3. compared with与……相比

4. take up/ account for占据（……比例）

5. increase /rise /decrease /drop by 10 percent上升/下降了10%

6. put ... in the second place把……放在第二位

7. rank the first place/ rank first排在第一位

8. contribute to the problem 引起/导致这个问题

9. generally speaking总的来说

10. as far as Im concerned/ as for me就我看來

三、套用句式

1. Recently， a survey has been conducted by... among... to find out...近来，由……在……中间进行了一项……的调查。

2. The survey shows that/ According to the findings， / As the data shows， more than half of the students choose... while 34 percent of them prefer... 调查表明，超过半数的学生选择……而34%的学生更愿意……。

3. The number of the students who... doubles that（/ the number）of those who... ……的学生人数是那些……的学生人数的两倍。

4. One reason why... is that... Another reason contributing to the results might be that ... ……的其中一个原因是……。另一个导致这结果的原因可能是……。

5. From the above discussion，/ From what has been discussed above， we can draw a conclusion that... 从上面的讨论中我们可以得出这样一个结论……。

四、习作修改下列习作中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。Dear Peter，

Id like to tell you something about the survey conducting last week in our school about middle school students health in China.

The survey shows that the state of middle school students body quality had been getting worse and worse year by year， with more people having the problems of being overweight. One reason could be that they have a heavy load in theirs study so that they seldom do physical exercise. Another reason is they dont do labor work like housework. Beside， they dont have a balanced diet. To deal with the situation， some experts suggest that students should do the sports for at least one hour a day. They are also advising to eat more fruit and vegetables but refuse junk food. In the end， Id like to learn from the situation about that in your country.

Yours，

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

日前QQ发布的调查报告显示，健走已成为2016年中国人最常见的运动。假设你是李华，请给你的美国朋友Paul写一封信，告知这一情况。内容要点：

1. 描述调查结果；

2. 分析健走最受欢迎的原因；

3. 说明你的看法；

4. 询问美国人最常进行的运动。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 开头与已经为你写好。

Dear Paul，

Im writing to tell you something about the survey conducted recently by social networking app QQ on most popular types of exercise among Chinese.

...

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

Li Hua

六、课外作业

某英文报想了解高中学生平时做家务的情况。假设你是李华，请结合调查结果，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。内容要点：

1. 描述图表；

2. 分析原因；

3. 提出你的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

参考答案与范文

习作修改

作者写信向朋友说明“中学生的健康状况”调查的结果，并给出了学生身体素质逐年下降的原因和专家建议。

1. conducting→conducted 因the survey与conduct是被动关系，故用过去分词作后置定语。

2. had→has描述学生的身体状况变得如何应该用现在完成进行时，且主语the state为第三人称单数形式，故应改为has。

3. problems→problem 指being overweight的问题，故应用单数形式。

4. theirs→their 在名词study前作定语，要用形容词性物主代词。

5. 在is后加that 表语从句的连接词that虽不充當成分，但通常不省略。

6. Beside→Besides 用副词besides表补充说明，而beside为介词，意为“在……旁边”。

7. 去掉the 因do sports（做运动）为固定短语。

8. advising→advised 主语they （the students）与advise是被动关系，要用被动语态。

9. but→and 此处两个动作为并列关系而非转折关系。

10. of→about 因learn about意为“了解”，而learn from 意为“向……学习”。

课堂练习

Dear Paul，

Im writing to tell you something about the survey conducted recently by social networking app QQ on most popular types of exercise among Chinese.

According to the survey， nearly 37 percent of the people chose fast walking as their favorite exercise while more than 23 percent selected running and more than 14 percent picked cycling. The rest preferred bodybuilding， dancing and other types of exercise.

One reason why fast walking tops popular exercise list is that fast walking is an easily accessible way with low cost. Besides， the health-conscious Chinese tend to do exercise outdoors in nature rather than being stuck in gyms or fitness facilities.

As for me， I also have a preference for this exercise， which makes me feel relaxed and energetic. Indeed， the more active we are， the more benefit we will get. By the way， whats the most popular type of exercise in America？ Im curious to know something about it.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

Li Hua

课外作业

Recently a survey has been conducted on how much housework students share at home. The survey shows only 20 percent of the students do housework while 70 percent admit doing only at times. The rest never help with housework.

One reason contributing to this result is that students are fully occupied with their study. Admittedly， parents who give top priority to their childrens study are also to blame. They think nothing equals study during their childrens senior school years， thus doing all that they can do to ensure that their children devote every minute to their study.

Personally， its our duty to do our share of housework as we are a member of our family. Besides， education is definitely more than acquiring knowledge. Sharing housework is supposed to be a part of education， as it helps to build a sense of responsibility.

责任编辑蒋小青

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