| 标题 | 经历叙述六步法 |
| 范文 | 谢怿 叙述经历是广东高考读写任务中常见的写作要点，但是很多高三学生在写作这类要点时会感觉很棘手，要么叙述得太详细，导致整篇文章各个段落的篇幅比例严重失调;要么不能在有限的篇幅之内突出主题。据此，笔者结合多年的高三教学经验，总结出了叙述经历类要点写作六步法，并归纳了每一步的经典表达，希望对紧张备考的高三学子有所帮助。 步骤与经典句式 第1步：引出故事、经历 ●On reading the story， my mind began its search for a similar experience. 读了这个故事，我的头脑开始搜寻类似的经历 ●What an unbelievable/ an embarrassing/a fantastic/a delighting experience it is！In my case， I have ever faced the same situation. 真是一次多么令人难以置信的/令人尴尬的/奇妙的/令人愉快的/经历！我曾面临同样的情况。 ●The story above reminds me of an unforgettable experience.上述故事让我想起了一次令人难忘的经历。 第2步： 交代故事的开端 ●The other day， I was doing sth. when... 不久前有一天，我正在做……突然…… ●There was a time when... 曾有一段时间…… 第3步： 推动故事情节的发展 ●To make things worse， ... 更糟的是…… ●Whats worse， ...更糟的是…… 第4步： 故事的高潮 ●At this very moment， ... 此时此刻…… ●All of a sudden， ... 突然/出乎意料地…… ●On the contrary，...恰恰相反…… ●Luckily /Unfortunately， ...幸运的是/不幸的是…… 第5步： 故事的结局 ●Eventually， ... ?终于…… ●Not only did sb. do... but sb. also did... 不但……而且…… ●So lucky was I that... 我如此幸运，以致…… ●It is not until... that.... 直到……才…… 第6步： 升华 如果下一个要点就是谈感想，这点可以省去。 ●What impressed me most is that... 给我印象最深的是…… ●I have learned from the story that... 从这个故事里我学到了…… ●I have gained much from this experience. 从这次经历中我学到了许多 ●From this experience， I learn /realize that no matter...， Ill always... 从这次经历中，我学到了/意识到，不管……我总会…… 高考链接 以你自己成长的经历说明你（读信后）的感受（2007广东高考） 经典示范 （引入）Your letter reminds me of an unforgettable experience. （开端）When I was in primary school， I failed to concentrate my efforts on study and was addicted to computer games. （发展）As a consequence， I soon became the last in my class. （高潮）On hearing the bad news， you didnt blame me at all. On the contrary， you made me understand that studying was the most important task during that time and encouraged me to study diligently. （结局）Eventually， I managed to quit my bad habit.（升华）Only when I read your letter did I realize you were so sad to see I behaved so badly at that time. 小试牛刀 1. 叙述你自己或朋友一次以幽默方式走出困境的真实或虚构的经历。 2. 叙述自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例。 参考范文 1. （引入）When it comes to getting out of a trap in a humorous way， my mind begins its search for such an example. （开端） Once， my friend Mark was supposed to deliver a speech in our school. （发展）However， he was a bit nervous and something was wrong with the microphone when he shouted excitedly. （高潮）Obviously， he was embarrassed but the sense of humor helped him out. After changing the microphone， he immediately smiled and said， “Please forgive me. My enthusiasm is so strong that it burnt the microphone.” （结局）All the students burst into laughter and the embarrassment was dissolved. 2.（引入）The passage reminds me of my own experience. ?（开端）When in senior one， I dreamed of playing computer games but I didnt own a computer.（发展）Seeing my trouble， my friend encouraged me to fly my dream by taking a part-time job. Then I accepted his advice and worked in a small shop as a shopkeeper after school. （高潮）To be honest， it was the hardest time that I have ever had， but I enjoyed it. （结局）After one years hard work， I earned enough money and bought my own computer. I burst into tears because I let my dream fly. （作者单位：广州市真光中学） 责任编校 蒋小青 |
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