标题 | 漫画类写作“三招”成篇 |
范文 | 董玉玲 Ⅰ. Teaching objectives: 1)Guide the key points in the writing 2)Write a passage about chatting online Teaching emphasis: Learn to organize the given materials in a logical passage Teaching difficulty: Learn to use materials to finish the writing Teaching methods: Flipped Classroom, Co-operative learning Teaching aids: The multimedia and other normal teaching tools Ⅱ. Teaching procedure Step 1 Greetings Step 2 Lead-in (1) Review T: Before we write an English passage, we must know the characteristics of English writing. You have watched the video about how to write a narration passage according to some pictures, so you must have got some information. Yes? Do you have any questions about it? (事先学生看过的微课内容包括英文写作的特点,基础写作的评分标准,写作训练的思路,记叙文写作导练——此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事,由此写一篇文章。) (2) Collecting the questions S (A): What kind of clause do we often use in an English passage? S (B) .... S (C) .... (3) Teachers summary and feedback Teacher explains. Teacher points out the difference between English and Chinese when we use attributive words. Step 3 Practice (1) Ask students to look at another picture. Show the following on PPT. 题目要求:此图反映的是有些孩子沉溺于网上聊天而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据漫画一篇100字左右的短文。 Get students to think it over how to write a caricature passage into groups. (2) Writing Ask students to write down their passages. Then get 2 students to read it out. Collect the comments on them. (3) Guiding Teacher gives some guide to explain how to write it well. Show the following on PPT: 三招必杀技 一:由画面到文字(简明 准确) 二:由结果推原因 (简单剖析 阐述观点) 三:由问题想对策 (情、理、趣) By learning the video, the students can sum up: a teenage boy is busy chatting online;ignore his mum;mothers unhappy expression Then find the reason:(theirs opinion)Show some structures to help like: Why do many teenagers choose to ... rather than ... Thats mainly because… Lastly, the way to deal with: Parents are those who feed, clothe, shelter and support us; when in trouble, we should turn to our parents for advice; Interesting topics are recommended. Step 4 Summary T: So far, we have got some materials about the picture. So please write the passage again. T: Before we write the passage, lets have a brief summary. If you want to write a passage, what points do we usually have? What details do we usually conclude? Ss: Like ... Step 5 Writing Ask students to finish writing the passage within 15 minutes. They may refer to the points they summarized. And offers the structures: As is vividly portrayed in the picture, ... Actually, whats portrayed in the caricature is ... By doing so, we can ... Step 6 Comment Get students to exchange their work to edit and make necessary corrections in pairs. Step 7 Homework Finish their composition (作者单位:新疆石河子143团第一中学) |
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